I am going to travel to Canada in July

i will plan my 9 day trip . My friend told me the flight is almost 1 day then i will have only 7 days in Canada. On my first day i think ill go to Ottawa. i want to visit different beautiful places as for example Galería Nacional de Canada, Downtown, etc i won't stay alone i will stay with a friend who lives there but he doesn't speak Spanish, only English so i have to strive to learn more English . On my second and third days i want to go more places, then my fourth, fifth and sixth i want to go to Toronto and take lots of pictures of these places in  downtown Toronto.

If somebody has traveled to Canada, can you please recommend places to visit and some delicious food, thank you so much!.

I am going to travel to Canada in July

The next days i will plan about my trip of 9 days. My friend said me the fly flight is almost 1 day, then i will have only 7 days in Canada. In On my first day i think to I will go to Ottawa. and i want to visit different beautiful places as for example Galería Nacional de Canada the National Art Gallery of Canada, downtown, etc. i don't won't be staying alone. i will stay with one a friend who lives there, but he doesn't speak Spanish, only English, so i have to strive to learn more English more. In On my second and third day i want to go to more places (in Ottawa?) then my fourth, fifth and sixth days i want to go to Toronto. and I will take a lot of pictures of theses places in the special downtown of Toronto.

If somebody has traveled to Canada, please you can can you please recommend places to visit and say me some delicious food?  Thanks you so much! 

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i will plan about my trip of 9 days. My friend said told me the fly flight is almost 1 day and then i will have only 7 days in Canada. In On my first day i think I will to go to Ottawa. and i want to visit different beautiful places, as for example Galería Nacional de Canada, Downtown, etc i don't won't stay alone; i will stay with one friend who lives there, but he doesn't speak Spanish only English so i have to strive to learn English more. In On my second and third day i want to go to more places then On my fourth, fifth and sixth fourth, fifth and sixth days i want to go to Toronto and i will take lot of pictures of theses places in special downtown of Toronto.

If somebody travel to Canada, please you can recommend places to visit and say tell me where to get some delicious food, thanks you so much!.

In general, you were able to get your thoughts across, which is the most important. Keep practicing and enjoy Canada!