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In the packet train. I heard a man talking in the train. When he took a packed train, a woman next him often pushed him. He was uncomfortable. Then when he looked at her, he noticed that a old guy next her was groping her boobs. “OMG, he is pervert!!” he thought. He was hesitating over whether he should do something. “I should do something but what if he is phycho pass and stab me?” He didn’t have courage to stop him. But he also thought “ If I don’t do it, I will be ashamed of what I am.”He finally decided to do something. However, the train arrived a nearest station of his apartment so he had to get off the train. When she look at her, she was smiling. Then he noticed that they were just making out. He was glad that he didn’t do anything.

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In the packet train.

I heard a man talking on the train. When he took a packed train, a woman next him often pushed him. He was uncomfortable. Then when he looked at her, he noticed that an old guy next her was groping her boobs. “OMG, he is a pervert!!” he thought. He was hesitating over whether he should do something. “I should do something but what if he is a psychopath and stabs me?” He didn’t have the courage to stop him. But he also thought “ If I don’t do it, I will be ashamed of what I am.” He finally decided to do something. However, the train arrived at the nearest station to his apartment so he had to get off the train. When he looked at her, she was smiling. Then he noticed that they were just making out. He was glad that he didn’t do anything.
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In the packed train.

I heard a man talking in the train. When he took a packed train, a woman next him often pushed him. He was uncomfortable. Then when he looked at her, he noticed that a old guy next her was groping her boobs. “OMG, he is a pervert!!” he thought. He was hesitating over whether he should do something. “I should do something but what if he is a psychopath and stabs me?” He didn’t have courage to stop him. But he also thought, “If I don’t do it, I will be ashamed of what I am.” He finally decided to do something. However, the train arrived a nearest station of his apartment, so he had to get off the train. When he looked at her, she was smiling. Then he noticed that they were just making out. He was glad that he didn’t do anything.
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In the packed train.

I heard a man talking on the train. When he took the packed train, a woman next to him  pushed him often. He was uncomfortable. Then when he looked at her, he noticed that an old guy next to her was groping her boobs. “OMG, he is a pervert!!” he thought. He was hesitating over whether he should do something. “I should do something but what if he is a  psycho and he stabs me?” He didn’t have the courage to stop him. But he also thought “ If I don’t do it, I will be ashamed of what I am.” He finally decided to do something. However, the train arrived at the station nearest to his apartment, so he had to get off the train. When he looked at her, she was smiling. Then he noticed that they were just making out. He was glad that he didn’t do anything.

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