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I would like to be grateful if someone helps me to correcting my writing English. This is story to my friend that he got accident and he can not join to our match, I write the letter about the match who was the winner, field conditions, and about his health condition, please help me to correcting my writing and give me some vocabularies it will really help me.  Thank you Dear jhony  I was so sad to hear your accident, I hope, you are doing well,  we had match yesterday and our team worked on well , we won with our rival. We got 5 point which The opposite only got 4 point, we made the supporters were so exited And the last match our supporters sang song about you The condition about the field was bad because of the raining it was so heavy, a lot of puddles was combined with mud on the field it was so difficult for us to step up but we believed that we could solve that situation Let us to know When you're going home bacause the next match we will arrange a new strategy with our coach if you have not been healthy you do not force yourself to come to match Best wishes Angel

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I would like to be grateful if someone helps me to correcting my writing English.

This is story to my friend that he got accident and he can not join to our match, I write the letter about the match who was the winner, field conditions, and about his health condition, please help me to correcting my writing and give me some vocabularies it will really help me. 
Thank you


Dear john I was so sad to hear about your accident, I hope, you are doing well,  we've played a match yesterday and our team played well,, we won with our rival. We got 5 point which The other team only got 4 point, we made the supporters were so exited And the last match our supporters sang song about you


The condition about the field was bad because of the raining it was so heavy, a lot of puddles was combined with mud on the field it was so difficult for us to step up but we believed that we could solve that situation


Let us to know When you're going home bacause the next match we will arrange a new strategy with our coach if you have not been healthy you do not force yourself to come to match


Best wishes

Angel
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This is story This is story about my friend who had an accident and he couldn't join our match, I am writing the letter about the match, who the winner was, field conditions and about his health condition. Please, help me correct my writing and give me some vocabularies that can really help me. Thank you Dear jhony I was gutted (very sad) to hear about your accident and I hope, you are doing well. Yesterday we had a match. Our team worked on well and we had defeated our rivals. We got 5 points, whilst the opposing team 4 points only. As supporters, we were so thrilled and at the last match, our supporters sang a song to you. The conditions about the field were bad because of the rain. There were a lot of puddles that combined with mud on the field made so hard to play but, we figured it out that we could solve that situation. Let us to know when you're going to go home because when there is the next match we will arrange a new strategy with our coach if you will not be in a good state of health to not force yourselves to come to the match. Best wishes I wrote a letter addressed to my friend Angel, about the final result and the winner, asking after his health conditions too.

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