The first step
Today I and my pupils went to a kindergarden. It is a kindergarden for children who have poblems with health. We were asked to help to paint some things in the yard to make it colourful and funny. It was great. The weather was nice indeed. We listened to music, talked and painted. Then we were invited to drink tea with sandwidches. I all was colourful but pleasant. )) I hope my pupils too.
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Today me and my pupils went to a kindergarden [nursery]. It is a kindergarden for children who have health problems. We were asked to help to paint some colourful and funny things in the yard. It was great. The weather was nice [too]. We listened to music, talked and painted. Then we were invited to drink tea and eat sandwiches. It was all colourful but pleasant. I hope my pupils enjoyed it too.
Anything highlighted are changes and anything in italics are suggestions. Well done :)
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The first step
Today my pupils and I went to a kindergarden. It is a kindergarden for children who have poblems with health. We were asked to help to paint some things in the yard to make it colourful and funny. It was great. The weather was nice indeed. We listened to music, talked and painted. Then we were invited to drink tea with sandwidches. I all was colourful and pleasant. )) I hope for my pupils too.Very god but try not to get into the habit of saying what you may commonly hear "me and my +(next bit)" that is not correct English.
"Tea with sandwiches" is fine it is used commonly but not as commonly as "tea and sandwiches"
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