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Someland´s main exports. Please,could someone correct it? :) The bar graph illustrates Someland's main exports in USD billion in 2005 and 2015. Additionally, it also shows the future perspectives for 2025. Overall, one can clearly see that International Tourism exports is the dominant industry, followed by dairy products and meat products respectively. Regarding Internationaltourism exports, they were about 6,5 USD billion in 2005. After 10 years, the exports increased by 0,5 USD billion, and the future perspectives estimate they will reach the peak to approximatelly 8 USD billion. Dairy products industry is on the second position, having exported 5 USD billion in 2005. Moreover, in 2015, one can observe a dramatically increase reaching its peak roughly on 8 USD billion. In addition, future projections in 2025 predict a slight decrease to 7,7 billion. In contrast, meat products exports gradually decreased along this years. In 2005, the exports were about 4 USD billion, and a decade after, they decreased slighly by 1 USD billion. In the future, it is expected that exports will fall slightly, standing at 3 USD billion. ______ 171 words

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Someland´s main exports. Please,could someone correct it? :)

The bar graph illustrates Someland's main exports in USD billion in for 2005 and 2015. Additionally, it also shows the future perspectives for 2025.

Overall, one can clearly see that International Tourism exports is the dominant export industry, followed by dairy products and meat products respectively.

Regarding Iinternationaltourism exports, they were about 6,5 USD billion in 2005. After 10 years, the exports increased by 0,5 USD billion, and the future perspectives estimate they will reach the a peak to of approximatelly 8 USD billion.

The Ddairy products industry is oin the second position, having exported 5 USD billion in 2005 (BETTER: with exports of $5 billion USD in 2005).. Moreover, in 2015, one can observe a dramatically increase reaching its a peak of roughly on 8 USD billion. In addition, future projections in for 2025 predict (BETTER: indicate) a slight decrease to 7,7 billion.

In contrast, meat products exports gradually decreased along this throughout these years. In 2005, the exports were about 4 USD billion, and a decade after, they had decreased slighly by 1 USD billion. In the future, it is expected that exports will fall slightly, standing at to 3 USD billion.

Well written.  Practice, practice :-)


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