One of the internet friends asked me “Do you know good online school to study English?”
One of the internet friends asked me “Do you know good online school to study English?”
I told her ‘'Native camp that is OK for us to take unlimited English lessons all day. why don’t you try it?”
I shared a screen and explained her how to take a trial lesson.
She is currently busy with taking good care of her parents. She wants somebody to listen her troubles to release her stress.
I told her my Kakao talk.
She read my blog that is related to her . She was mad at me. She asked me to delete about my story She really don’t like.
The story is I received a full of junk food from her as a gift. I was really shocked.
Anyway, she is aggressive and a short temper. I don’t like this kind of woman. My blog is my private space. I will stop keeping in touch with her.
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Well done Banboke-san! Good effort. I've attached a few small corrections for your consideration.
One of mythe internet friends asked me, “Do you know a good online school to study English?”
The phrase "the internet friends" reads like some (publicly well-known) group, not necessarily connected to you. Using "my" connects them with you.
"I told her ‘'At Native camp itthat is OK for us to take unlimited English lessons all day. Wwhy don’t you try it?” I shared a screen and explained to her how to take a trial lesson. She is currently busy with taking good care of her parents. She wants somebody to listen her troubles to release her stress.I told her my Kakao talk. She read my blog that is related to her. She was mad at me. She asked me to delete theabout my story. She really didn'tdon’t like it."
"The story is that I received a full (box? parcel?) of junk food from her as a gift. I was really shocked."
What was full of junk food? A box? A parcel? I'm not sure. Maybe I've misunderstood this sentence.
"Anyway, she is aggressive and has a short temper. I don’t like this kind of woman. My blog is my private space. I will stop keeping in touch with her."
Keep up the good practicing! :)
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