IELTS Academic exam Hello, I'm preparing for the IELTS exam, and the writing part is the most difficult for me so I'm trying to practice using exam's samples. Please I need a help to correct my essay. Thank you. -------------------------------------- The first bar chart shows the percentage of computer ownership from 2002 and 2010. The second graph provides information about computer ownership by education level in 2002 and 2010. We can see in the first graph that people are buying more and more computers. In other words, about 65% of all people interviewed had a computer in 2002. This number increased gently 60% in 2006 then to 70% in 2010. Turning to the second graph, we can notice that postgraduate persons had the highest percentage in owning computers, at 90% in 2010 and 85% in 2002. While the percentage of computer ownership rose steadily from the lowest level of education to the highest one in 2002, this number grew faster in 2010. Overall, the percentage of computer ownership rose when the level of education is higher in both years, 2002 and 2010. By the same logic, this number grew from 2002 and 2010.