144th day 2019 (plan)
Today is Friday and this is my plan for today. Actually, the plan is similar to yesterday's plan. I just did some correction of grammar. After writing this note, I am going to go to work. During working hours, I am going to stop by a shop to buy some plaster for my flat, as I forgot to do it yesterday. After work, I am planning either to work out or to decorate my flat. As a third option, I could combine these activities. That is enough for today.
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144th day 2019 (plan)
Today is Friday and this is my plan for today. Actually, the plan is similar to yesterday's plan. I just did ('I just did' is ok, but more natural to say 'I've just done' ) some correction of grammar and after writing this note, I'm (More natural to shorten 'I am') going to go to work. During working hours, I hope (Better to use an alternative rather than repeating 'going to' again. ) to stop by a shop to buy some plaster for my flat, as I forgot to do it yesterday. After work, I am planning either to work out or to decorate my flat. As a third option, I could combine these activities. That is enough for today.Very good writing. Mostly just suggestions for improvement, rather than corrections.
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I can just dream of having a rest.
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What are you doing with plaster? This is Friday! What about a rest in the evening?
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Thank you! :)
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No errors that I can see. Good job.
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