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About a film Though it lasts over two hours, Andhadhun has not many dance scenes like other Indian films. Personally, I am not really interested in the casting or the actors and actresses, and I am merely fascinated by the story and how it develops. Having said so, the Indian film does have a few loopholes if we really want to criticize it. For instance, I myself am puzzled why the doctor suddenly stops the operation to get the musician's livers. It does not make any sense to me, as the doctor knows Akash's eyes are recently damaged. Well, I'd better stop here in case that I will reveal many spoilers.

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About a film A film review  ('About a film' is fine as a title if you wanted to be very casual, otherwise I'd say 'A film Review which is more standard)

Though it lasts over two hours, Andhadhun has not many dance scenes like other Indian films. Personally, I am not really interested in the casting or the actors and actresses, and I am merely  ('merely' is fine but a touch formal. A more casual alternative if you wish is 'only') fascinated by the story and how it develops. Having said so, the Indian film does have a few loopholes if we really want to criticize it. For instance, I myself am puzzled why the doctor suddenly stops the operation to get the musician's livers.(Sorry, I don't understand 'livers' here ?) It does not make any sense to me, as the doctor knows Akash's eyes are recently damaged. Well, I'd better stop here in case  I will reveal many a lot of  (Using 'will' and 'many' here sounds a little too formal. ) spoilers.


Hi Veronique. Not much to correct :) Most of my corrections are really just suggestions. I didn't understand the word 'livers' in the context here .... the organ ?? Maybe I need to see the film !


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... not many dance scenes like in other Indian films.

... that I will reveal too many spoilers.


For me, your text is close to being perfect. I wonder, what a native speaker will tell you.

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