My assignment

This is my plan. Please give me some advice and fix my mistake in grammar grammar mistakes (or "grammatical errors"). Thank you!

1. Make a list for potential employers (Should list the advantages of hiring you)

2. Narrative version for a potential employer

List

Computer: Microsoft Word, Excel, Powerpoint.

Language: Conversational English

Strong communication skills, able to work with diverse populations

Responsible

Enthusiastic

Teamwork skills

Hard working in high-pressure environments

2. Narrative

Honestly, With a few years of self-employment experience and having worked in some local grand, I believe that I can bring many customers to your company. I was sale cloth sold clothes when I was a student, that which helped me to get  acquire strong communicates Skill communication skills with almost diverse populations, and a computer is a tool cannot lack off for influence my work. Then I went to work I have worked at Ninomax, Dallas Cake, and Edso in recent years, and those are jobs give gave me the experiences working with my a team and hard-working in the pressure environment working hard in a high-pressure environment for the benefits of the company. Moreover, responsibility and enthusiasm are qualities,  I have learned,  qualities I have learned and imprinted in my mind.

Especially Most importantly, I am an avid learner, and persistent at work. I do not promise to be the best person but I will devote be devoted and accompany you for the longest time a long time.