Composition If you are Li Hua, your English pen Pal Mary wrote to say that she will come to your school as an exchange student in the new semester. Please reply to the email for a brief introduction.

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Composition If you are Li Hua, your English pen Pal Mary wrote to say that she will come to your school as an exchange student in the new semester. Please reply to the email for a brief introduction. These include: 1. To Express congratulations and welcome; 2. Courses Related to Chinese Culture (1 ~ 2) ; 3. Other ways to learn about Chinese culture. Dear Mary, Welcome to China! I'm exceedingly excited when I hear that you'll come to my school as an exchange student and it's my privilege to introduce some courses about Chinese culture. Here're the details. Nowadays, Chinese traditional music gains its popularity and so many famous musicians mix it with modern electronic music. If you're hooked by it, it's sensible of you to learn playing a traditional instrument like Erhu. Besides, writing Chinese characters, known as Calligraphy, is becoming a popular trend. So if you wang to know Chinese history, learning Calligraphy is also an amazing choice. Additionally, you can read daily newspapers and you can obtain some useful information about Chinese culture. Hope you can enjoy a nice time in China. Yours faithfully, Li Hua

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Composition

If you are Li Hua, your English pen Pal Mary wrote to say that she will come to your school as an exchange student in the new semester. Please reply to the email for a brief introduction. These include:
1. To Express congratulations and welcome;
2. Courses Related to Chinese Culture (1 ~ 2) ;
3. Other ways to learn about Chinese culture.

(Your English skills are already good so based on this assignment, I edited this to make it sound more natural.)

Dear Mary,

Congratulations on being chosen to come here as an exchange student! (I added this sentence because your assignment said you should express congratulations.) Welcome to China! (In English we don't usually say "welcome" until the person has arrived. Before they arrive you can say you're looking forward to their arrival.) I'm exceedingly (Most students would think it's weird if you're exceedingly excited so no need to say that but you could say "really excited".) excited when I hear that you'll be coming to my school as an exchange student.

and it's It would be my privilege to teach you introduce some courses about Chinese culture. Here're the details. For example, nowadays Chinese traditional music gains its is popular, ity and so many famous musicians mix it with modern electronic music. If you like 're hooked by it, it's sensible of you might want to learn to playing a traditional instrument like the Erhu. Besides In addition, writing Chinese characters, known as calligraphy, is becoming a popular trend. So if you wang to know Chinese history, learning Calligraphy is also an amazing choice. (It doesn't make sense that doing caligraphy will teach a person Chinese history so this needs more explaination.) Additionally, you can read daily newspapers and you can obtain some useful information about Chinese culture. (A foreigner probably doesn't know enough Chinese characters to read a Chinese newspaper in Chinese and Chinese newspapers aren't as helpful in learning Chinese culture as visiting historical sites.)

Hope you have can enjoy a nice time in China.

Your friends faithfully,
Li Hua

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