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The Earthquake
Yesterday was my sister's birthday. Some family members got together to celebrate for her by having dinner together.
While we were chatting and proposing a toast, my mobile rang. It was my mom's call. She asked me if I had felt the earthquake just now. I was suprised and said loudly, "What? An earthquake?" It was ten to eight at that moment. All the people were Everyone around me was shocked and stopped laughing when they heard "the earthquake". A moment later, they started to connect with log on to the internet to see the news through their own mobiles.
My mom said she was watching TV when she felt the sofa moved.
Our city is located in an earthquake zone. We were all afraid that a big earthquake would come. I remembered , there were seeing a large number of frogs appearing on the road several days ago. That was a strange thing.
Soon, one of us found the news report and read it aloudly: "At 19:57 today, Beijing time,when 19 57 points today, the Guxian, Anzexian and Linfen city outskirts (lattitude 36.5 degrees north , longitude 112.1 degrees east ) experienced a 3.8 earthquake, with a focal depth of 16 kilometres." (Sorry, I had a very difficult time trying to understand if you meant three cities, or one city in a region. Border usually applies to regions and countries. I finally worked out was a point between the three cities? Part of the problem is that Chinese city names are written as either one or two words in English... difficult to search...)
I said to all the them, "Don't worry, it's passed has finished. Even if another earthquake were coming soon, we would not die if we do in the right thing." So, we went on chatting and eating. (were...would: Your speech indicated that you didn't expect a second earthquake, so I changed it to the proper conditional.)
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The earthquake
Yesterday was my sister's birthday. Some family members got together to celebrate for her by having dinner together.
While we were chatting and proposing a toast, my mobile phone rang. It was my mom's calling. She asked me if I felt the earthquake just now. I was suprised and said loudly,"What? An earthquake?" It was 19:50 at the moment the time. All the people were shocked and stopped laughting when they heard "the earthquake". A moment later, they connected with the internet using their cell phones to see the news.started to connect with internet to see the news through their mobilephones.
My mom said she was watching TV when she felt the sofa moved.
Our city is located in the earthquake zone. We were all afraid that a big earthquake would come. I remembered, several days ago, there were a large number of frogs that appeared on the road. That was a strange thing.
Suddenly, one of us found the news and read loudly:"Beijing time when 19 57 points today, theGu Xian, Anze Xian linfen city in border (36.5 degrees north latitude, 112.1 degrees east longitude) had a 3.8 earthquake, the focal depth is 16 kilometers."
I said to all the them:"Don't worriedworriy. It has finished. Even if the earthquake is coming soon, we will not die if we do in behave the the right way." Then, we went on chatting and eating.
This must have been so frightening. Thank you for sharing this. Hope to talk with you soon. I remember you telling me about the frogs. If only we would watch nature. It is such a good indication of what is happening on our earth.
hugs,
Terasee
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