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Never argue with others on the internet. Many arguments can be seen on the internet. Perhaps at that time, somebody gets fury so that he/she can't calm down. But once back to be normal, he/she definitely would feel that it is not advisable to argue with others he/she never knew before. We'd better save our energy to communicate with people who can help each other, instead of an endless argument with strangers. Maintaining an amicable net environment is a common target valued in all net community. As a consequence, this is a process which continues to need the efforts of all.

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Never argue with others on the internet.

Many people have arguments on the internet. Perhaps somebody gets furious and can't calm down. But once back to be normal, they would definitely feel that it is not advisable to argue with people they didn't even know. We'd be better off saving our energy to communicate with people who can help each other, instead of engaging in an endless argument with strangers. Maintaining an amicable net environment is a common goal in all net communities. As a consequence, this is a process which continues to need the efforts of all.


Nice work, Song. One quick note "he/she", like you used, is technically correct, however, it would be pretty uncommon to see a native speaker use it in anything but a very formal (possibly legal or technical) document. In recent times, "they" has become the dominant was to give a gender neutral third-person pronoun. However, you might consider constructing a paragraph referring to a hypothetical situation using "you" and conjugating in second person.

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Never argue with others on the internet.

Many arguments can be seen on the internet. Perhaps at that time, somebody became so furious that he/she couldn't calm down. But once back to normal, he/she definitely would feel that it is not advisable to argue with others that he/she never knew before. We'd better save our energy to communicate with people who can help each other, instead of an endless argument with strangers. Maintaining an amicable net environment is a common target valued in all net communites As a consequence, this is a process which continues to need the efforts of all.

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