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Raining Yesterday, Line told me it would be raining soon. I could know that too cause there were a lot of giant gray clouds on the sky. I just didn’t know that it had been raining until today’s afternoon. Luck me, I don’t have any classes today. I saw my friend’s photo on Facebook. She struggled to ride her bike to school. A strong wind blew her umbrella up and soaked her from head to feet. Rarely do I open my window because I am afraid of fly bugs or spiders can invade my place. I am not good at playing and catching them. We won’t get along with each other so don’t come in. But on a rainy day, I feel that the risk of their appearance at my room is low. So I opened my window. It seems like I opened a different world. Combination of rain sound and the fresh smell made me feel so relaxing.

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Raining

Yesterday, Line told me it would be raining soon. I could knew that too because there were a lot of giant gray clouds in the sky. I just didn’t know that it had been raining would rain until today’s afternoon. Luckily for me, I don’t have any classes today. I saw my friend’s photo on Facebook. She struggled to ride her bike to school. A strong wind blew her umbrella up and soaked her from head to feet toe. Rarely do I open my window because I am afraid of flying bugs or spiders will invade my place. I am not good at playing and catching them. We won’t get along with each other, so don’t come in! But on a rainy day, I feel that the risk of their appearance at in my room is low. So I opened my window. It seems like I opened a different world. The combination of rain sound and the fresh smell made me feel so relaxed.

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Highlighted sections are where I didn't understand what you were trying to say -- if you rephrase it and explain, I can correct it. Good work! Your vocabulary and syntax is very good, you just need to work on using the correct verb tenses and being consistent with which tense you're speaking in.
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