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My wonderful trip in Netherlands Last week, I visited Amsterdam by myself. To be honest, I didn't expect that I would travel to Netherlands. But that is life, right? You can't imagine what would happen to your life, whether good or bad. We are destined to face many dramas and tragedies in our life. Nevertheless, we encounter tragedies most of time but we still have enough time to get out from it. The most impressive scenery was the Canals of Amsterdam. This city is surround by canals so you can enjoy the view everywhere. Furthermore, the density of bicycle in Amsterdam is the highest in the world. It was wonderful to see Dutch riding bicycles throughout the city. Also, you can see cruise navigating on the canals. I didn't take a cruise in Amsterdam but I believed that was an amazing experience. Amsterdam becomes to a totally different city in the night. One of the most famous spots in Amsterdam is red light street. I have heard about it for a long time, but never visit it. I was so surprised to see many semi-nude hookers behind windows. I was embarrassed and didn't know where to look. Obviously, sex business is popular in Amsterdam. By the way, marijuana is legal there but I hate smoking so much. I visited Utrecht and Rotterdam on the second day. Those cities are not far from Amsterdam and really worth to visit. People are friendly in Utrecht. The driver even gave me a free drive because I'm from Asia.You can also enjoy canals in this city and there weren't many tourists. Personally, Miffy museum is the best place in Utrecht! I do love that adorable rabbit! The most famous place in Rotterdam is Kinderdijk. You need to take trams and boats to get there. There are a couple of windmills which were built in 1740. They have been a UNESCO World Heritage Site since 1997. I suggest that you rent a bicycle to visit that place, and look for the best spot to take photos with the windmills. Finally, I would recommend Netherlands if you're planning for the honeymoon. No doubt, it is an absolutely stunning country. But it is also the most expensive country I have traveled to. So you need to have an appropriate budget to afford everything in Netherlands.

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My Wonderful Trip in Netherlands

Last week, I visited Amsterdam by myself. To be honest, I didn't expect that I would travel to Netherlands. But that is life, right? You can't imagine what would happen to your life, whether good or bad. We are destined to face many dramas and tragedies. Nevertheless, most of the time, we make it though. (I would recommend you remove the text in blue. It feels off-topic, because the article is mostly descriptive and not philosophical).

The most impressive scenery was the Canals of Amsterdam. This is a city which is surround by canals, so you can enjoy the view everywhere. Furthermore, the density of bicycle in Amsterdam is the highest in the world. It was really chill as you were seeing wonderful to see the Dutch riding bicycles throughout the city. Also, you can see cruises navigating the canals. I didn't take a cruise in Amsterdam but I believed that was an amazing experience.

Amsterdam turns to a total becomes a totally different city in the dark is coming. One of the most famous spots in Amsterdam is the red light street. I have heard about it that for a long time, but never visited it. I was so surprised that there were to see many semi-nude hookers almost didn't wear clothes behind windows. It was such I was embarrassed and I didn't know where I should to look. Obviously, sex business is popular in Amsterdam obviously. By the way, marijuana is legal there in here but I hate detest smoking so much.

I visited Utrecht and Rotterdam on the second day. These cities are not far from Amsterdam and really worth the visit.
People are friendly in Utrecht. The driver even gave me a free drive because I'm from Asia.You can also enjoy canals in this city and there weren't many tourists. In my personal point of view, Miffy Uuseum is the best place to visit in Utrecht. personally! I do love that adorable rabbit!

The most famous place in Rotterdam is Kinderdijk. You need to take trams and boats to get there. There are a couple of windmills which were built in 1740. They have been a UNESCO World Heritage Site since 1997. I suggest that you can rent a bicycle to visit that place, and look for the best spot to take photos with the windmills.

For the most part, Finally, I would highly recommend the Netherlands if you're planning your honeymoon. I would recommend if you want to have the honeymoon in Netherlands. It is an absolutely stunning country. That is a beautiful and interesting city absolutely. But it is also the most expensive country I have traveled to. So you need to have an appropriate budget to afford everything in Netherlands.

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