Please check the correct my sentences :)
2019.05.17.
I went to class of sensory play with my son. Today's class was with bananas.
The air in class room filled with sweet scent of bananas.
He cried when i removes the bowl of bananas after class.
I am sorry for him he is very cute when he cries.
Finally I had to give some banana to him.
He looked delighted like having the world when he got bananas.
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Please check the correct my sentences :)
2019.05.17.I went to a sensory play class of sensory play with my son. Today's class was with bananas.
The air in the classroom was filled with the sweet scent of bananas.
He cried when I removed the bowl of bananas after class.
I am sorry for him, he is very cute when he cries.
Finally I had to give some banana to him.
He looked delighted, like having the world, when he got bananas.
Not sure about this expression, maybe 'it meant the world to him'
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Please check the correct my sentences :)
2019.05.17.I went to the class of sensory play with my son. Today's class was with bananas.
The air in the classroom filled with the sweet scent of bananas.
He cried when I removed the bowl of bananas after the class.
I am sorry for him he is very cute when he cries.
Finally, I had to give some banana to him.
He looked delighted like having the world when he got bananas.
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Nice story Eunju.
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