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IELTS WRITING 2 QUESTION: Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. ANSWER: It is believed by some that artificial intelligence has a promising development which leads to a positive future, while the others concern that humans cannot suitable to the computers-master world. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of artificial intelligence, and I believe that humans can adapt the AI process and benefit from convenience and modernity it brings. The applications of artificial intelligence show the efficiency and convenience in human's daily life. In a word, thanks to artificial intelligence, people can undoubtedly achieve the driverless process in the future. For example, the Tesla will unveil the updated vehicles in the next year and the driverless system will be possible in the third decades of 21 century, which will exactly save our time and shorten the transportation. It is predicted that artificial intelligence can be used in managing weather quality and forecasting the weather, which I believe that it is beneficial to the human's future. On the other hand, the basic occupations will be replaced by artificial intelligence, which might be the reason why some people concern that they are not prepared. In a word, if the artificial intelligence, like the robots, takes the job as waiters, then the original workers have to apply for another new job, which will somehow waste their time to search. However, it is still an opportunity for people to deserve something more challenge and creativity. In conclusion, the development of AI is inevitable, and I believe that the impact of that can save people time and let them choose some more challenge and creative work.

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On the other hand, the basic some occupations will be replaced by artificial intelligence, which might be the reason why some people are concerned that and they are not prepared for it. In a word, if the artificial intelligence, like the robots, takes over the job as waiters, then the original human workers have to retrain (means learn new skills) and apply for another new job, which will somehow waste their time to search. However, it is still an opportunity for people to deserve try (or learn) something more challenging e and creative ity. 

In conclusion, the development of AI is inevitable, and I believe that the impact of that  AI can save people time and let them choose some a more challenging e and creative work career.

Hi Serena, nice to see you writing again.  Difficult topic, well done. 

#1 : This part, I'm not sure what you mean. In [ ] is what I think you wanted to say. If  I am wrong, you can explain a little in the comments and I'll try again.

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It is believed by some that artificial intelligence has is a promising development which will lead s to a positive future ,  . While the others are concerned that humans cannot suitable to the computers-master world#1   [humans are not suited to live in a world where computers are in control]. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of artificial intelligence, and I believe that humans can adapt the AI process technology and so that we can benefit from convenience and modernity modernisation it will  bring us s. 

The applications of artificial intelligence shows the efficiency and convenience in human's daily life. In a word, thanks to artificial intelligence, people can undoubtedly achieve the driver-less process technology in the future. For example, the Tesla will unveil their updated vehicles in the next year and their driver-less system will be possible in the third decade s of 21 century (usually we just say in the 2030's)  ,  which . This will exactly save our travel time and shorten the improve transportation. It is predicted that artificial intelligence can be used in managing weather quality and forecasting the weather, which I believe that it is beneficial to the human's future.

I cannot submit in one correction so I need to split into two.

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