Hello, can help to review the article? many thanks.
Hi everyone,
this section is looking at the picture and then write a article.
please help to modify my grammar or you can release a version which you perform.
thank you,
topic: talk about the tide of the world 's oceans can be used to generate electricity.
Answer:
Regarding the turbine definition, we can see the picture which point the difference between two picture.
first of all, there are two side of Ocean and Waterline. the turbine change the direction depend on which have high level of waterline. In other word, when the right side is under the lower level of waterline, it will rotate the turbine to right direction or rotate the turbine to left when the left side is under the lower level of waterline.
second, base on the turbine work that can change the waterline of two side, so that, it can create the surrounding which can keeping the turbine working by moving water .
In the end, the turbine can harvest energy in moving water. it could be the solution for many of the world people that live without electricity.
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Hi everyone,
This section consist of a picture diagram and written article.
please help to modify my grammar or you can release a version which you perform.
thank you,
topic: Discussion on how the world 's oceans can be used to generate electricity.
Answer:
Regarding the turbine definition, we can see in the picture,two different diagram.
Firstly lets point out the difference between the two diagram..
From the diagram , there are two side of Ocean and Waterline. the turbine change the direction depend on which have high level of waterline. In other word, when the right side is under the lower level of waterline, it will rotate the turbine to right direction or rotate the turbine to left when the left side is under the lower level of waterline.
secondly, base on the turbine work that can change the waterline of two side, it can create the surrounding which will keep the turbine working by the moving water .
At the end, the turbine can generate energy from the moving water. This could be the solution to many part of the world where people are living without electricity.
This section consist of a picture diagram and written article.
please help to modify my grammar or you can release a version which you perform.
thank you,
topic: Discussion on how the world 's oceans can be used to generate electricity.
Answer:
Regarding the turbine definition, we can see in the picture,two different diagram.
Firstly lets point out the difference between the two diagram..
From the diagram , there are two side of Ocean and Waterline. the turbine change the direction depend on which have high level of waterline. In other word, when the right side is under the lower level of waterline, it will rotate the turbine to right direction or rotate the turbine to left when the left side is under the lower level of waterline.
secondly, base on the turbine work that can change the waterline of two side, it can create the surrounding which will keep the turbine working by the moving water .
At the end, the turbine can generate energy from the moving water. This could be the solution to many part of the world where people are living without electricity.
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Hi Joe,
There has a choose file button at the end of notebook page which you can upload pictures.
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Liz, how do you embed a picture in your Notebook entry?
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