Artificial intelligence
People have different views about artificial intelligence and their influence on our lives. All of these views can exist. The future with AI is close and I am nervous a little bit about this because people aren’t ready for computer’s attack.
On the one hand, AI will make our lives easier. There are exist a lot of examples now, here are some of them: stores without seller, cars without drivers, an automatical securety, “a smart house” and etc. All of this make our lives convenient and give us more free time. Also, AI will have positive impact on medicine. There are exist robots which can provide hard operations now. Amount and quality of such robots will increase. Automatically system in medicine will help to sick people. Medicine service will be better.
On the other hand, despite positive sides, AI has negative sides. If there are stores without seller, a lot of people will stay without their work. Due to this automation is creating unemployment or job losses for us. Another fact is that safety of personal dates threatened by. Our credit cards and personal information save in computers. If computers or robots attack, we will be weak and unable to defend ourselves. It will be an information apocalipsis.
In conclusion, I am nervous a little bit about influence of AI on our lives. I think that we should be neat with new automatic system.
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Artificial Intelligence - always capitalize the title
People have different views about artificial intelligence and their its (in this case, "artificial intelligence" is a singular noun, not a collective group. So you would use "it" and not "them") influence on our lives. All of these views can exist. The future with of AI is close and I am nervous a little bit (I recommend saying "I am a little nervous") about this because people aren’t ready for computer’s attack. (Maybe you want to say "computers to attack"?)
On the one hand, AI will make our lives easier. There are exist a lot of examples now, here are some of them: stores without seller (make sure the nouns match in number - stores is plural so sellers should be plural), cars without drivers, an automatical securety (double check your spelling), “a smart house”, and etc. All of this make our lives convenient and give us more free time. Also, AI will have a positive impact on medicine. There are exist robots which can provide hard operations now (I suggest saying "perform operations/surgeries"). Amount and quality of such robots will increase. Automatically system in medicine will help to sick people. (What do you mean?) Medicine service will be better.
On the other hand, despite positive sides, AI has negative sides. If there are stores without seller, a lot of people will stay without their work. (I think you mean they could lose their jobs) Due to this automation is creating unemployment or job losses for us. (Yes, this is repeating the sentence before this, so you don't need both sentences about losing jobs.) Another fact is that safety of personal dates threatened by. (<-- I would try this sentence again, I don't quite understand) Our credit cards and personal information save in computers. If computers or robots attack, we will be weak and unable to defend ourselves. It will be an information apocalipsis (spelling).
In conclusion, I am nervous a little bit about influence of AI on our lives. I think that we should be neat (not the best word, I'm not sure what you mean...maybe "careful") with new automatic system.
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