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I would appreciate it if you correct the wrong sentence below. Thank you.
2019.05.13.
Last night i went to bed too late so today i was half asleep and half awake morning time and took a nap for two hours. So i couldn't do things that i have to do morning time. As soon as I woke up, I went to the hospital hurriedly with my son because today is his inoculation day. Weather is going hot. I wore a short T-shirt but i wasn't cold. Spring has passed quickly. I feel sad(sorry) that spring is shorter and shorter.
2019.05.14.
Today When breakfast I almost got into an argument with my husband for a very very small thing.
I was angry that moment. but We resolve a conflict by talking.
I felt not good since morning and a little sorry to my husband.
I went to an amusement class with my son. we go there every Tuesday. When he went in a few weeks, he cried for awkwardness. But today he was very active and had a good time. He learned color and became a fairy. He wore fairy clothes, especially the hat was so cute.
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I would appreciate it if you correct the wrong sentence below. Thank you.
2019.05.13.
Last night, I went to bed late. That's why today I was half asleep and half awake in the morning and took a nap for two hours. So I couldn't do the things I had to do in the morning. As soon as I woke up, I went to the hospital hurriedly with my son because today was his inoculation day. The weather was so hot. I wore a short T-shirt but I wasn't cold. Spring has passed quickly. I feel sad(sorry) that spring pass by way too fast.
2019.05.14.
Today at breakfast I almost got into an argument with my husband for a very very small thing.
I was angry that moment, but we were able to resolve the conflict by talking.
I didn't feel too good this morning because I felt a little bad for my husband.
I went to an amusement class with my son, we go there every Tuesday. When he went in a few weeks, he cried because he felt so awkward. But today he was very active and had a good time. He learned color and became a fairy. He wore fairy clothes, and the hat was so cute.
2019.05.13.
Last night, I went to bed late. That's why today I was half asleep and half awake in the morning and took a nap for two hours. So I couldn't do the things I had to do in the morning. As soon as I woke up, I went to the hospital hurriedly with my son because today was his inoculation day. The weather was so hot. I wore a short T-shirt but I wasn't cold. Spring has passed quickly. I feel sad(sorry) that spring pass by way too fast.
2019.05.14.
Today at breakfast I almost got into an argument with my husband for a very very small thing.
I was angry that moment, but we were able to resolve the conflict by talking.
I didn't feel too good this morning because I felt a little bad for my husband.
I went to an amusement class with my son, we go there every Tuesday. When he went in a few weeks, he cried because he felt so awkward. But today he was very active and had a good time. He learned color and became a fairy. He wore fairy clothes, and the hat was so cute.
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