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Need Corrections for a Short Story 3- Кенгуру Жёлтыи English Translation: The Yellow Kangaroo Gulya, the yellow kangaroo has many friends. She invited them all to eat ice cream together. When they arrived at the parlor, there was only banana ice cream. They ate so much ice cream that they could not leave out the door. They were stuck in the parlor forever. Russian Attempt: Кенгуру Жёлтыи Гуля, кенгуру жёлтыи у её много друзья. Она всё их предлагала на мороженое. Когда они прибывали в зал, там было толко мороженое с бананом. Они ели так много, что не вписывються через дверной проём. Вечно они в зал. Notes: This story is about a female kangaroo. Also, I wasn't sure if there was an equivalent to "ice cream parlor" in Russian. In corrections, please stick as close to the original English translation as you can. I really appreciate those who take the time. ~Kai

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Жёлтая кенгуриха

У Гули, жёлтой кенгурихи, много друзей. Она всех пригласила поесть мороженое. Когда они пришли в кафе, там было только банановое мороженое. Они съели так много, что не смогли пройти в дверь. Они навсегда застряли в кафе. 

Parlor - кафе-мороженое. Можно просто кафе. 

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