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IELTS WRITING TASK2 QUESTION: Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? ANSWER: It is said by some that we have overwhelming choices nowadays. I completely agree with this statement because people easily become more and more uncertain about what to do in the future, which leads to their uncontrol anxiety and heavy pressure. Sometimes people feel uncertain and nervous when different kinds of opportunities approaching them. In details, most of the people do not know themselves totally so that they can not figure out which one is their most interested in and which one they are not willing to handle, even with thousands of wealth. We have to make a decision at this moment even though we do not understand what the things exactly are and what we truly want to do. So, we fear that the one which we did not choose is actually the best one, which keeps us feel nervous constantly. We desire a true suggestion which can point out every detail. For example, each intern needs a professor to instruct them and then they can feel more confident when they struggle with the severe situation. People will become more and more anxious when they face too many choices because our humanity is so willing to compare. We will unsatisfied with our lives and we want to change, but we can not decide the right thing if we do not learn the first crucial step, which is to be grateful and relax. The study shows us that people who like smiling are much healthier than those who are serious all the time. And most of the corporations gather their members at the end of the year, having a team party, which is definitely beneficial to their mental. In conclusion, with too many choices, it still could be a problem and I somehow agree with this statement because people can not figure out which is their favorite thing and learn to relax.

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IELTS WRITING TASK2

QUESTION:
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

ANSWER:
It is said by some that we have overwhelming choices nowadays. I completely agree with this statement because people easily become more and more uncertain about what to do in the future, which leads to their uncontrollable anxiety and feeling of being under heavy pressure.

Sometimes people feel uncertain and nervous when faced with different kinds of opportunities approaching them. In details, Most of the people do not know themselves well, so that they cannot figure out which option they are most interested in and which one they are not willing to handle, even if they have enough money. We have to make a decision at this moment even though we do not understand the details of each option and what we truly want to do. So, we fear that the one which we don't choose will actually turn out to be the better one, which makes us feel nervous constantly. We desire a true suggestion which can point out every detail. For example, each intern needs a professor to instruct them so they can feel more confident when they struggle with difficult situations.

People will become more and more anxious when they are faced with too many choices because our humanity is so willing to compare all the available options. We will be unsatisfied with our lives and we want to change them, but we cannot decide the right thing if we do not learn the first crucial step, which is to be grateful and relax. Studies show that people who like smiling are much healthier than those who are serious all the time. For example, when corporations gather their members at the end of the year to have a team party, it is definitely beneficial to their mental health.

In conclusion, with too many choices, it still could be a problem and I somehow agree with this statement because people cannot figure out which is their favorite thing and learn to relax.

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Your writing is not bad!! You bring up some interesting points in your essay and do a good job of presenting some great examples. I do think you have a few mistakes with your grammar that could be improved with more practice. Also, your essay can be improved a lot by choosing either 3rd or 1st person to use throughout your essay. Do you know what this means? Sometimes the subject of your sentence is "people" or "they" (3rd person), but other times you use "we" (1st person). It's better to use only one person throughout.

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