[HELP!!] a short preface Dear italki users, I have written a short preface of an essay which tells a story of a journy in Europe. I'll really appreiciation it if you correct any grammar or word choice mistakes in the text. (I marked also some parts that I specially want to get some advices) Thank you in advance! Dear readers, This is [name], the writer of the essay on the journey to Europe << when I talk about the moment >> First of all, this book is included with narration. You can feel the European sentimentality through your ear by using QR codes inserted in each episode. Some of you might wonder if you are on the right track on your life. After reading this book, I hope that you can lay back a little bit and take your time time to look back at yourself. (!!here 'look back at yourself' can sound judgmental? I want it to sound neutral.) I wrote the moments that were telling me that the decisions that I had made in my life were not so bad. (!!would it be better to say like this?: Here in this book you can find the moments that were telling me that the decisions that I had made in my life were not so bad.) I want to share today this relaxation with you too. I’m looking forward to seeing the world where any steps taken by the youth are encouraged and so that we can have true freedom in our hearts.