Mother's day
I became a mom recently and I'm
trying to adapt my live in this new context. I always wanted to be mother, so it is a dream that became real.
Anyway, have a son is an experience that change our live in way that no one can imagine or be prepared.
Today is a mother's day and I thanks God for this bless in my life and ask Him gives me wisdom to take care this little treasure. My son, my gift, heritage.
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Mother's Day
I became a mom recently and I'mtrying to adapt to my live life in this new context. I always wanted to be a mother, so it is a dream that became real.
Anyway, having a son is an experience that changed our life in a way that no one can imagine or be prepared for.
Today is a mother's day and I thanks God for this blessing in my life and ask Him gives me wisdom to give me the wisdom to take care of this little treasure. My son, my gift, my? heritage.
Aww, how sweet! I understood your journal pretty well. Just a couple of really small spelling things. Holidays are capitalized in English. Live and Bless are verbs, while Life is a noun. I hope your prayer comes through for your son. :)
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just one small question... did you mean changed or changes?if you mean changed you refer to whom? it's not clear, you and your husband? your family? or are you referring to you and your son? (well, it obviously has changed his life, lol)... the rest of the correction our buddy proposed is absolutely right
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