Introduction of my website
Please help me to improve the English in the introduction text of website
Our expert group in various domains competence can bring you a directive to achieve an advanced level in your targeted skill. Starting from beginner stage, you need only few weeks of hard working to earn an intermediate level, then few months to become a professional. If you’re a qualified person, we deliver you the industrial state of the art in your field.
We truly believed that the vast resource of information on the Internet makes your learning easier only if you know which books to read, which online training to take and from whom to get advises.
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Introduction of my website
Please help me to improve the English in the introduction text of websiteWe truly believe that the vast number of online resources makes your learning easier only if you know which books to read, which online training to take and whose advice to follow!.
Our expert group in various domains competence can bring you a directive to achieve an advanced level in your targeted skill. Our experts can bring direction to your goal of improving your skills and advancing in your field. better: Our experts can help!
Starting as a beginner, you'll need only a few weeks of hard working to achieve an intermediate level, then a few months more to become a professional. If you’re a qualified person, we deliver you the industrial state of the art in your field.
This paragraph does not make the business sound like a reputable business. It makes your business sound like a 'fake' business trying to get people to give them money for a 'quick fix."
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Introduction of my website
Please help me to improve the English in the introduction text of the websiteOur expert group experts in various domains levels of competence competency can bring you a directive to achieve an advanced level in your targeted skill. Starting from the beginner beginning stage, you will need only few weeks of hard working to progress earn an to the intermediate level. then Then in a few months, to you will become a professional. If you’re a qualified person, we deliver train you in the industrial state of the art in your field.
We truly believed that the vast resource of information on the Iinternet makes your learning easier. only We'll provide you with list of if you know which books to read, which online training to take and from whom to get advises advice (noun).
I'm wondering if you meant--If you're already a professional, we will help you learn modern techniques and methods in your field.
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For example, to master the programming in Java, there are hundred of books to read. My idea is to recommend beginner or intermediate learners only one or two book which can help them to achieve an advanced level. It can save them a lot of time surfing on the Internet.
But it can be other skills and the learning materiel can be a video, online course or discussion with an expert.
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what is this a website for? What kind of business is it? What does it do? Right now, your text is too vague.
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