131st day 2019 (plan)
The plan for today consists of several steps. Firstly I am going to take the job car and to have it washed. Secondly, I will order something for a snack at work. Then I will go to work for some hours. When I am free of work, I will go to the shop to buy WD-40 (special oil) for the door's locks in my flat. And finally, I will work on my flat the whole time remaining before going to bed.
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131st day 2019 (plan)
The My plan for today consists of several different tasks steps. Firstly, I am going to take the job company car and to have it washed. Secondly, I will order something for a snack at work. Then, I will go return to work for some a number of hours. When I am free of done with work, I will go to the shop store to buy WD-40 (special oil) for the door's locks in my flat. And finally, I will work on my flat the whole time remaining before going to bed.Steps is not bad, just tasks would be better. Comma after first. Comma after then. Did you wash the company car prior to going to work? I'm understanding after you order a snack at work that you then went to work. Maybe, you meant you'll work for a longer period of time. I'm not grasping the correlation between door locks and your flat in the oil sentence. Should it be and fix my flat?
Hope I conveyed my questions, but overall you did well! Keep trying as your spelling was great!
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