Travel
Travel could mean a lot of things. May be relax, funny, stress, discovery, adventury, etc. People travel for a job, to take care the health, to buy things, there are the vacation travels too. When the people to travel to some place, they can do this on car, bus, airplane or even bike; there are who get your bag on bike and goes on.
When the travel is car or bike, it's possible stop in many places on the road for know.
Travel with car it's good, but also need some care with speed; some people drive most fast that it's ok.
There are more that one hundred and fifty countries and many differente languages. Brazil it's the only country that I personal know; here there is twenty six states and a lot of cities.
It's necessary a lot of time to know every world. Any people likes so much when goes to one place that they return. Between the most different places, there are the beach, mountain, city with buildings to choose.
Don't matter if ta person chose the same place to visit when he/she travel, always there are a new thing to see.
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Travel could mean a lot of things. It may be relaxing, funny, stressful, full of discovery, adventure, etc. People travel for a job, to take care of their health, to buy things, there are vacations, too. When the people to travel to some place, they can do this in a car, on a bus, airplane or even a bike; there are people who put their bag on a bike and go.
When we travel by car or bike, it's possible to stop in many places on the road and visit.
Traveling by car is good, (but also need some care with speed; some people drive most fast that it's ok.)
There are more than one hundred and fifty countries and many differente languages. Brazil is the only country that I personally know; here there are twenty six states and a lot of cities.
(It's necessary a lot of time to know every world. Any people likes so much when goes to one place that they return.) Among the most different places, there are the beaches, mountains, cities with buildings to choose from.
It doesn't matter if the person chose the same place to visit when he/she travels, there are always new things to see.
Good job Karoline! I put two parts in parentheses because I didn't understand them. If you want to try write them a different way (ou escrever-as em português, entendo um pouco), I'm happy to help.
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Travel
Travel means a lot of things about people.They have free time to relax and have fun. Also they could discover new places and try adventurous activities like scuba-diving! People may travel for various reasons. For example, they may travel for work or to see a specific doctor. Shopping and vacation are possible reasons too. If people want to travel, they can use a car, a bus, an airplane or even a bike; there are people who get their backpack and go ahead !When the mean of transport is a car or a bike, it's easy to visit many places because you can make stops as you drive.
Travel with car is convenient but drivers should be careful not to drive too fast.
There are more than one hundred and fifty countries and many different languages too. Brazil is the only one that I really know; here, there are twenty six states and a lot of cities.
It takes a lot of time to discover new places. Most people love to visit new destinations and when they are back home they have beautiful memories ! All these different places give us numerous choices like beaches and mountains or big cities with huge buildings. It doesn't matter if a person chooses the same place to visit again because there are always new things to discover.
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hi, I am not a teacher ! I tried to write it again with some corrections ! :)
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