Internet
Internet was invented about five decades ago. Nowadays, People use the internet daily and they need to connect to the internet to work, to study, to communicate with other people who can live in other countries, as long as there is a signal. So, technology has changed our lives.
To start with, humans have invented a lot of gadgets in this century. The majority of people have a mobile phone and they can call someone, send a message, take a picture, make a video or use apps if they download. I use many times my mobile phone to check the mail and take a photo if I don't have a camera. Besides, there are some people who have to clean house or to cook meals. So, these people don't waste their time doing housework.
On the other hand, the internet has created new ways of sharing information. For example, There are some people who use the app skype to communicate with other people who can live in other countries. So, you can send a message, call or video call if you use the app skype in an instant. Moreover, you can add other users who can chat with you. There are many apps similar to the Skype app. Moreover, there are some people who use social media sites to share information with other people. For example, you can use the app LinkedIn that you can use to find a new job. Obviously, you can share your cv to many companies. Other ways to share information are Forums, you can have questions, share an idea or start a group discussion. Normally there is a moderator who edits or remove unnecessary posts.
In my personal experience, I'm a computer technician and I have to fix problem-related with technology. Currently, I work at schools, where there are many devices that I have to configurated or solve some problem with them. Students study with iPad. Teachers use digital boards, touch screen tv, projector, printers. So, technology has changed education as well.
In my opinion, technology can help humans, but technology has some disadvantages too. You can find good things and bad things on the internet. Besides, technology usually is expensive. People sometimes waste money on buying a new phone that they don't make the most of their new phone.
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The internet was invented about five decades ago. Nowadays, People use the internet daily and they need to connect to the internet to work, to study, to communicate with other people who can live in other countries as long as there is a signal. Therefore, technology has changed our lives. To start with, humans have invented a lot of gadgets in the last century. The majority of people have a mobile phone and they can call someone, send a message, take a picture, make a video or use apps if they download them. I often use my mobile phone to check my mail and take a photo if I don't have another camera. Besides, there are some people who have to clean the house or to cook meals. So, these people don't waste their time doing housework. On the other hand, the internet has created new ways of sharing information. For example, there are some people who use the app Skype to communicate with other people who live in other countries. With Skype, you can send a message, call or video call when you use the app in an instant. Moreover, you can add other users who can chat with you. There are many apps similar to Skype. Moreover, there are some people who use social media sites to share information with other people. For example, you can use the app LinkedIn to find a new job. Obviously, you can share your CV to many companies. Other ways to share information are forums: you can have questions, share an idea or start a group discussion. Normally there is a moderator who edits or removes unnecessary posts. In my personal experience, I'm a computer technician and I have to fix problems related to technology. Currently, I work at schools, where there are many devices that I have to configure or solve some problem with them. Students study with iPads. Teachers use digital boards, touch screen TVs', projectors, printers. So, technology has changed education as well. In my opinion, technology can help humans, but technology has some disadvantages too. You can find good things and bad things on the internet. Besides, technology is usually expensive. People sometimes waste money on buying a new phone that they don't make the most of their new phone.
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You are confusing the internet and technology. . YOu are talking about technology, computers and internet. Computers and the internet are part of technology but not the same thing.
Also, it is unclear what your thesis is. You seem to have more than one.
If you want to try and write it again, you can begin your essay with your sentence "Technology has changed our lives" You can put the opinion in there by saying "Technology has changed our lives for better and for worse.
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Ruben , at your essay you describe adequately the effects the modern technology has in our lives ! Without a doubt technology has both positive and negative outcomes as you mention!
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