I can’t leave my phone anymore!
Please correct my journal, thank you!^ ^
I'm going to talk about my handphone. I downloaded a lot of useful apps on my phone. For example, I have office softwares, a to-do list, a calendar, a timer and even a virtual ruler on my phone, all of which greatly improve my work and life efficiency.
What's more, the instant messengers are popular these days, such as WhatsApp, WeChat and Line. I use these communication tools on daily basis to contact my friends, colleagues, clients and family.
For example, if clients send you a message about work via the messenger tool, prompt responses
are expected. Therefore, I have to keep an eye on these tools all the time, which makes me more dependable on my phone.
Besides, since my family and I live in different cities, we use FaceTime to chat and bond. It really helps to improve our relationship and helps us get closer to each other than, say, letters or emails can do.
Furthermore, mobile phones are portable and convenient. With my phone, I’m basically carrying a whole set of a calendar , a calculator, a camera, a mailbox and minutely updated newspapers. It really becomes indispensable to my life.
Thank you.
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I can’t leave my phone anymore!
Please correct my journal, thank you!^ ^I'm going to talk about my handphone. I downloaded a lot of useful apps on my phone. For example, I have office software, a to-do list, a calendar, a timer and even a virtual ruler on my phone, all of which greatly improve my work and life efficiency.
What's more, In addition, the instant messengers such as WhatsApp, WeChat and Line are popular these days, such as WhatsApp, WeChat and Line. I use these communication tools on a daily basis to contact my friends, colleagues, clients and family.
For example, if clients send you a message about work via the messenger tool, prompt responses
are expected. Therefore, I have to keep an eye on these tools all the time, which makes me more dependable on my phone.
Besides, since my family and I live in different cities, and we use FaceTime to chat and bond. It really helps to improve our relationship and helps us get closer to each other than, say, letters or emails can do.
Furthermore, mobile phones are portable and convenient. With my phone, I’m basically carrying a whole set of a calendar , a calculator, a camera, a mailbox and minutely updated newspapers. It really becomes indispensable to my life.
Thank you.
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help my improve my English pls ^^
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