Please correct my essay , and l hope make it idiomatic .
ln modern society ,most of people have a command of a skill .There are many persons who know a lot about a field .But in other fields ,they are ordinary .The reason of the phenomenon is that we always choose a major to study .
Before you come into college ,you will face a choice between science and humanities .lt is a vital choice for youself .Because it links to your future career .lf you are blank about it ,l will share some advice with you .First you should think about your preferences .Do you like science or humanities ?lf you don't like science ,maybe humanities is a good choice .However ,in most of situations ,you even don't know whether you like it or not .Thus you need to know your character .lf you are patient and precise ,maybe you suite for science .ln contrast you probably have affluent emotions and ideas ,literary talent ,so humanities evidently is the best choice .Sometimes it's up to your dream .lf you want to be a doctor ,you must choose science .
Whatever science or humanities ,it's a important precondition to you whether you like it or it's suitable for you .
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Please correct my essay , and l hope make it idiomatic .
ln modern society, most of people have a command of a skill. There are many persons who Many people know a lot about a field, .B but in other fields, they are ordinary. This is because we choose a major to study and focus on that.Before you come into enter college, you will face a choice between science and humanities. lt is a vital choice for youself .B because it links relates to your future career. lf you are blank unsure about it which to choose, l will share here is some advice with for you. First, you should think about your preferences. Do you like science or humanities? lf you don't like science, maybe humanities is a good choice. However, in most of situations, most of the time, you don't even know whether you like it them or not.Thus you need to know your character. lf you are patient and precise, maybe you are more suited for science .ln contrast, you probably may have affluent emotions and ideas or literary talent, so humanities evidently is would be the best choice .Sometimes it's up to it depends on your dream .lf you want to be a doctor, you must choose science .
Whatever science or humanities, it's an important precondition to you whether you like it or it's suitable for you . Whether it be the sciences or humanities, it's important to know before you choose which one you prefer or is more suitable for you.
Note: no space between word and punctuation that follows but put space after punctuation. (ex. They are ordinary. The reason...)
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