business mail series-ask for inofrmation from peer department Hi Andy, Hope you doing well. This is Hola from security team. I am reaching you here to ask for your opinion about factory A. I was infor

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business mail series-ask for inofrmation from peer department Hi Andy, Hope you doing well. This is Hola from security team. I am reaching you here to ask for your opinion about factory A. I was informed that this factory is not going to involve in any IP sensitive item process while yesterday I received another news which told me that factory A would participate in project X, which is a rather sensitive program in IP field. I need your help to confirm if factory A would work on project X and which process will it be involved? It would be great if you can share us the milestone for Project X in factory. Thanks. Hola

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business mail series-asking for information from a peer department

Hi Andy,
Hope you're doing well.
This is Hola from the security team. I am reaching out to you here to ask for your opinion about factory A. I was informed that this factory is not going to be involved in any IP sensitive item processes. while However, yesterday I received another news which told me seems to indicate that factory A would will in fact participate in project X, which is involves a rather sensitive program in IP field IP process (or processes?).
I need your help to confirm if factory A would will work on project X and which process (or processes) will it be involved?
It would be great if you can would share with us the milestone for Project X in this factory.
Thanks!
Hola

(Hi Hola, 你的写了很好。The subject of your writing is technical, so I had to guess at what your exact meaning was. Hope these corrections help. Best regards, Stephen)

Hi Andy, Hope you doing well. This is Hola from security team. I am reaching you here to ask for your opinion about factory A. I was informed that this factory is not going to involve in any IP sensitive item process while yesterday I received another news which told me that factory A would participate in project X, which is a rather sensitive program in IP field. I need your help to confirm if factory A would work on project X and which process will it be involved? It would be great if you can share us the milestone for Project X in factory. Thanks.

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