My favourite photo (please correct this text)
One of my favourite photos is this one of my family.
My sister-in-law (my brother's wife) took the photo in the beginning of September of 2018 when I was on holiday with my wife and children.
We were in a countryside where we've got a summer cottage. We were walking in a field not far from our cottage at the evening. It was the sunset. We were just walking and playing with a kite. There are me with our daughter on my shoulders and my wife with our son on her shoulders. When the sister-in-law took the photo we were smiling because it was such a wonderful sunset and we were happy.
I love this photo because there are the most important people for me on it and we had a nice holiday together.
I've got the photo on my phone like a screen saver so everytime when I see it I always smile.
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One of my favourite(1) photos is this one of my family.
We were in the countryside where we've got a summer cottage. We were walking in a field not far from our cottage in(3) the evening. It was the sunset. We were just walking and playing with a kite. There is me with our daughter on my shoulders and my wife with our son in her arms(4). When my sister-in-law took the photo we were smiling because it was such a wonderful sunset and we were happy.
I love this photo because it shows the most important people in my life and we had a nice holiday together.
I've got this photo on my phone like a screen saver so every time(5) when I see it I always smile.
(1) "favourite" is British spelling. "favorite" is American spelling.
(2) I don't know why but when talking about months we say "at the beginning of" or "at the end of" or "in the middle of September".
(3) And when talking about hours of the day we say "in the morning" or "in the evening" or "in the afternoon".
(4) She is holding him in her arms and you are carrying your daughter on your shoulders.
(5) "every time" is two words.
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