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Writting test 1 Water is the main resource of our life. We use water everyday, to do minor things like washing our hands, but also to do very important things like cooking. Researchers can divide water’s use in three different fields: industrial, agricultural and domestic Analyzing the charts below, agriculture requires most ware in underdeveloped areas of the world, as South America, Africa and Asia’s Central and South East. The industries demand more water in more developed areas, like North America and Europe. One thing which calls our attention is that almost 90% of the water used in Central Asia is for agricultural purpose. On the other hand, only 5% has an industrial use. Another interesting appointment (?) is the place where the domestic use is bigger, which is South America. North America and Europe have very similar configuration. The division in the purpose stands almost the same percentages. The same happens when we compare Africa and Central Asia. As we can notice, water is used is different ways depending on the world’s region and the purpose of use of it.

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Water is the main resource of our life. We use water everyday every day to do minor things like washing our hands, but also to do very important things like cooking. Researchers can divide water’s use (or, "...the use of water...") in three different fields: industrial, agricultural, and domestic.

Analyzing (if you are making reference to charts, I would say "according to the below charts" or "as per the below charts") the charts below, agriculture requires most ware water in underdeveloped areas of the world, such as South America, Africa and Asia’s Central and South East. The industries demand more water in more developed areas, like North America and Europe. One thing which calls our attention is that almost 90% of the water used in Central Asia is for agricultural purposes; on the other hand, only 5% has an industrial use. Another interesting appointment point/fact/circumstance is the place where the domestic use is bigger, which is South America. North America and Europe have very similar configuration percentages in terms of the different uses division in the purpose stands almost the same percentages. The same happens when we compare Africa and Central Asia. As we can notice, water is used is in different ways, depending on the world’s region and the purpose of its use of it.

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