One of my friends
One of my friends, let me call her Y, really makes me speechless sometimes. Actually, Y is a nice person, and I feel extremely easy with her because I feel free to talk anything with her and she always can emphasize with me. We both like to think about life, so our talks can go deeper than normal talks with others, which I like the most. I can't deny that she is kind of my best friend, but it cannot offset the angry feeling I have to her. About two months ago, she told me she wanted to travel to New York with me on June 20th. I was happy with that, then I waited for her to get the American Visa, but she always procrastinated and found excuses. I tried to remind her a lot of times, but all of my exertions ended up with nothing.
It's possible that she is in France so she figures getting the visa is easy, but I am not the person who used to book the flights and hotels until the last minute. I know I am a more anxious person than her, perhaps in this aspect, we are totally opposite. I don't want to lose temper with her, although I know if I do she will feel very sorry. Maybe I will talk with her the last time about this thing, and let her know I am on the edge of the burst, seriously. Whatever, I have prepared to go to travel by myself in mind.
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One of my friends
One of my friends, let me call her Y, really makes me speechless sometimes. Actually, Y is a nice person, and I feel extremely comfortable around her because I feel free to talk anything with her and she always can empathize with me. We both like to think about life, so our talks can go deeper than normal talks with others, which I like the most. I can't deny that she is kind of my best friend, but it cannot offset the angry feeling I have towards her. About two months ago, she told me she wanted to travel to New York with me on June 20th. I was happy with that, then I waited for her to get the American Visa, but she always procrastinated and found excuses. I tried to remind her a lot of times, but all of my efforts ended up with nothing.It's possible that (because?) she is in France so she figures getting the visa is easy, but I am not the type of person who is used to booking the flights and hotels until the last minute. I know I am a more anxious person than her, perhaps in this aspect, we are totally opposite. I don't want to lose my temper with her, although I know if I do she will feel very sorry. Maybe I will talk with her the last time about this thing, and let her know I am very frustrated with her, seriously. Whatever, I have prepared to go to travel by myself in mind.
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One of my friends
One of my friends, let me call her Y, really leaves me speechless sometimes. Actually, Y is a nice person, and I feel extremely easy with her because I feel free to talk about anything with her and she will always emphathize with me. We both like to think about life, so our talks can go deeper than normal talks with others, which is what I like the most. I can't deny that she is kind of my best friend, but it cannot offset the angry feeling I have towards her. About two months ago, she told me she wanted to travel to New York with me on June 20th. I was happy about that, Then I waited for her to get the American visa, but she always procrastinated and found excuses. I tried to remind her a lot of times, but all of my exertions led to nothing.It's possible that because she is in France she figures getting the visa will be easy, but I am not the kind of person who is used to booking flights and hotels at the last minute. I know I am a more anxious person than her; perhaps in this aspect we are total opposites. I don't want to lose my temper with her, although I know if I do she will feel very sorry. Maybe I will talk with her one last time about this thing, and let her know I am on the edge of bursting, seriously. Whatever, in my mind I am prepared to go to travel by myself.
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