My fifth essay - topic: sport
Sport is the topic of this essay. In my opinion, it is more important for people’ lives, as their body as social lives. And I have two reasons for this. First, it is a moment for people to work out their bodies, which is essential to have healthy. For example, older people who are practicing sports regularly usually have more disposition and quality of life. Second, people who are practicing sports have more opportunities to know other peoples. For example, It occurs with sports in a group, how soccer, basketball, and volleyball. That is why I think sports is fundamental in body and social development for people.
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My Fifth Essay - Topic: sport
Sport is the topic of this essay. In my opinion, it is more important for peoples’ lives, as their body as social lives and their body. And I have two reasons for this. First, it is a moment for people to work out for their bodies, which is essential to have a healthy body. For example, older people who are practicing sports regularly usually have more disposition and quality of life. Second, people who are practicing sports have more opportunities to know other peoples. For example, It occurs with sports in a group, how soccer, basketball, and volleyball. That is why I think sports is fundamental in body and social development for people.My Fifth Essay- Topic: Sport
Today's topic is sports. In my opinion, sport is important for peoples' lives and their body. I have two reasons to support my opinion. First, through sports people can work out; sport is essential to have a healthy body. For instance, people who play sports usually have a positive disposition in life and live a better life. Second, people who play sports have more opportunities to know other people. For instance, each person in a sports group/team knows each other. That's why I think sport is important for the body and social development.
I have attempted to rewrite it to make it easy to read. Also, I have tried to preserve the gist of the entry.
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