A two-noses dog The shelter of California ,USA picked up a two-noses dog,whose name is Toby.The institution tried to find a new home for Toby,but people did not bring him to home,because they did not

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A two-noses dog The shelter of California ,USA picked up a two-noses dog,whose name is Toby.The institution tried to find a new home for Toby,but people did not bring him to home,because they did not like the two-noses dog.Toby was in dangerous ,it was at risk to being put him down. It was lucky,a music producer who has the habit of adopting the special pets.The artist has a two-head animal,five-legs dog,and two-legs dog.Thanks to Toby having the two noses,he can find anything when ever well it was hidden.He can play and fetch like any other dogs.The artist said Toby is the sweetest dog on the earth.

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A two-noses dog

The shelter of California ,USA picked up a two-noses dog,whose name is Toby.The institution tried to find a new home for Toby,but people did not bring him to home,because they did not like the two-noses dog.Toby was in dangerous ,it was at risk to being put him down.
It was lucky,a music producer who has the habit of adopting the special pets.The artist has a two-head animal,five-legs dog,and two-legs dog.Thanks to Toby having the two noses,he can find anything when ever well it was hidden.He can play and fetch like any other dogs.The artist said Toby is the sweetest dog on the earth.

I rewrote it to sound more natural:

A shelter in California picked up a dog with two noses named Toby. The shelter tried to find a new home for him, but nobody wanted him because the people didn't like a dog with two noses. Toby was in danger, he was at risk of being put down.

Toby got lucky, there was a music producer who has a habit of adopting unique pets. The artist has a two headed pet, a five legged dog and a two legged dog. Because Toby has two noses, he can find anything, even if it is hidden well. He can play fetch just like any other dog. The artist said that toby is the sweetest dog on earth.

Is this a true story? I'd like to see a picture of a dog with two noses!

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