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Fourthy essay - Music and Child Today I want to talk about music and child. Music is much important for developing children. It has educational songs for all ages. For example, Baby Shark’ song is easy to children sings and dances during your relax moments with their friends, family or alone. The message from that song is about members inside a family Interact with each other It is talking about the child, dad, mom, grandfather, and grandmother. In addition, kids songs help to improve at kids various abilities, how to sing, to dance, and to listen. So, I think all types of music is good for the kid.

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My Fourthy essay - Music and Children

Today I want to talk about music and children. Music is much very important for developing children. It has  There are educational songs for all ages. For example, the song Baby Shark is easy for children to sings and dances during their leisure moments with friends, family or when the child is alone. The message from  That song is about how members of a family Interact with each other and it talks about the child, the dad,  the mom, the grandfather, and the grandmother. In addition, children's songs help them to improve at kids various  of their abilities, such as singing, dancing, and listening. So, I think all types of music are good for kids.

Kelly, não esqueça que ''child'' é singular (criança) e ''children'' é plural (crianças).

Estou a disposição para qualquer dúvida.

Keep up the good work!

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