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A game experience I like games. Playing is human nature. But unlike boys who can play with their buddies, I have little game player friends around me. Among all the games out there, I don't know which ones I would like. It often takes much time and energy to find out. That's the tricky part of life. You know there are many things and people you would like, but you just don't know them or have contact with them. In 2016, a friend I made in a game recommended overwatch to me. It is a MOBA-style FPS game launched by Blizzard, which has a good reputation. I had never played FPS games before, but I still replaced my 7-year old notebook for it. During the first months I played overwatch, I was crazy about it and played several hours every day. I also made some playmates in the game. In overwatch, teamwork plays the key role, and the ability of one player to carry the game is limited. The good part is playing with friends is way more happier than playing alone. But at the other hand, if you can't make a team, the game experience may be ruined by conflicts, blame or even rude words among strange teammates, especially when you are losing. I'm not a skillful player and have only reached gold level at most. Normally I just hover at silver level. That's a little frustrating and embarrassing. You go up and down, and struggle to make even a little breakthrough. Life is sometimes the same. But at the end of the day, the process is the most important thing. As the ardour faded, I became a so-called "cloud player". I only get online for seasonal special events which launch new skins, postures, paints and so on. Considering the time I've enjoyed, the money I spent on it is quite worthy.

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A Gaming Experience

I like games. Playing games is human nature. But unlike boys who can play with their buddies, I have little few gamer player friends around me. Among all the games out there, I don't know which ones I would like. It often takes much time and energy to find out. That's the tricky part of/about life. You know there are many things and people you would may like, but you just don't know them nor have contact with them.
In 2016, a friend I made in a game recommended Overwatch to me. It is a MOBA-style FPS game launched by Blizzard, which has a good reputation. I had never played FPS games before, but I still replaced my 7-year old notebook for it.
During the first months I played Overwatch, I was crazy about it and played it for several hours every day. I also made some playmates in the game. In Overwatch, teamwork plays the a key role, and the ability of one player to carry the game is limited. The good part is that playing with friends is way more happier fun than playing alone. But at on the other hand, if you can't make a team (or 'can't work together in a team'), the game experience may be ruined by conflicts, blame or even rude words among strange teammates, especially when you are (or 'the team is') losing.
I'm not a skillful player and the highest I have only reached is gold level at most. Normally I just hover at silver level. That's a little frustrating and embarrassing. You go up and down, and struggle to make even a little breakthrough. Life is sometimes the same. But at the end of the day, the process is the most important thing.
As the ardour faded, I became a so-called "cloud player". I only get go online for seasonal special events which launch new skins, postures, paints and so on. Considering the time how much I've enjoyed the game, the money I spent on it is was quite worthwhile (or more informally 'worth it').

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Great job! Make sure you capitalise the proper noun 'Overwatch'. I hope this helps =)

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