Sports Sport is very important in our life.Nowadays,a lot of people say that it is important play sports among young people,while others disagree with these points of view and believe that doing sport

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Ekaterina

Sports Sport is very important in our life.Nowadays,a lot of people say that it is important play sports among young people,while others disagree with these points of view and believe that doing sports is not essential for young people. In my opinion,sport is really important.Firstly,many people do morning exercises, jog in the morning and train themselves in clubs, in different sections and take part in sport competitions.Young people learn to live properly, lead a healthy lifestyle.Secondly,sport brings character and spirit in youths.Thanks to sport, a man becomes brave and courageous since childhood, you can rely on him. However,there are some people who disagree with these statements and say that youths lose a lot of time doing sports.Many people think that young people should waste their time properly.Moreover,they believe that this occupation is very expensive.In fact,they say that not every young person cannot allow doing sport. Nevertheless,I believe that free time is better spent on sports, heals your body rather than going to pubs and becomes dependent on bad habits. What is more, if a person cannot afford expensive sports, he can simply run or do yoga. In conclusion, I strongly believe that sport is very good for everyone,especially for youths.Doing sports,people become more healthy and develop the spirit.

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Sports

Sport is very important in our life.Nowadays, a lot of people say that it is important to play sports while you are young.while Others disagree with this point of view (one point of view, so singular), and believe that doing sports is not essential for young people.

In my opinion, sport is really important. Firstly, many people do morning exercises, jog in the morning and train themselves in clubs in different sections, and take part in sport competitions. With sport, young people learn to live properly and lead a healthy lifestyle. Secondly, sport brings character and spirit to youths.Thanks to sport, a man develops bravery and courage from childhood and you can rely on him.

However, there are some people who disagree with these statements and say that youths lose a lot of time doing sports. Many people think that young people should waste spend their time properly. Moreover, they believe that this occupation is very expensive. In fact, they say that not every young person cannot allow doing can afford to do sport.

Nevertheless, I believe that free time is better spent on sports. It heals your body and is better than going to pubs and becoming dependent on bad habits. What is more, if a person cannot afford expensive sports, he can simply run or do yoga.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that sport is very good for everyone, especially for youths. Doing sports, people become more healthy and develop a strong spirit.

I hope this correction helps. I understood you very well.Just one little point. Don't forget to add a space after a comma in a sentence. "Here,I left no space after the comma." "Here, I left a space after the comma".

But, well done for the writing !

Hi Ekaterina, either 'sport' or 'sports' can be used to refer to athletic activities in general. 'Sport' is used in British English, while 'sports' is used in American English.

Ignore Jared, Ekaterina. Jared is just being rude and critical for no purpose except his own amusement, I suspect.

I don't have the time, nor ambition to correct your entire entry (it's late here), but I will tell you this. "Sport is very important" is incorrect. If you are looking to communicate the general importance of sports, you would say, "Sports are very important." There are A LOT of grammatical errors in your entry. Also, as an argument for the importance of sports, this is a very weak one. You use a lot of opinions and generalizations as facts. Even your opinions fail to root themselves in some level of factual information or data, so that further weakens your argument. I know this probably is not the sort of help you wanted with this entry, but I've offered you some valid insight nonetheless. Use it to your advantage, or don't.

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