argumentative essay about the challenge of engineering with solar energy.
I have written the first paragraph of an argumentative essay about the challenge of engineering with solar energy. Can you help me check it?
Energy solar: a challenge for Engineering.
The energy of the future is power solar. Airplanes powered by solar energy, cars equipped with rechargeable solar batteries, solar cells that provide electricity to the home are just some technological advances that engineering has been working in recent years. Engineers driven by the need to reduce the effects of global warming caused by fossil fuels have detected in solar energy an alternative solution to the problem. The use of renewable energy sources is a trend that is gaining ground, but there is still a lot of work to be done. Therefore, the biggest challenge that engineer faces today is to consolidate solar energy as the energy of the future.
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An argumentative* essay about the challenge of engineering with solar energy.
I have written the first paragraph of an argumentative essay about the challenge of engineering with solar energy. Can you help me check it?Solar energy: a Challenge for Engineering.
The energy source of the future is solar power. Airplanes powered by solar energy, cars equipped with rechargeable solar batteries, and solar cells that provide electricity to the home are just some of the technological advances that engineering has been developing in recent years. Engineers driven by the need to reduce the effects of global warming caused by fossil fuels have detected in solar energy an alternative solution to the problem. The use of renewable energy sources is a trend that is gaining ground, but there is still a lot of work to be done. Therefore, the biggest challenge that an engineer faces today is to consolidate [strengthen?] solar energy as the energy of the future.
*An argumentative person is someone who likes to argue a lot. The only alternative I can think of at the moment is "opinion piece" -- you are writing to express your opinion on a topic. "Expositive" is possible, but it's a formal word:
https://forum.wordreference.com/threads/argumentativo.441933/
https://www.dictionary.com/browse/expositive
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argumentative essay about the challenge of solar energy engineering.
I have written the first paragraph of an argumentative essay about the engineering challenge of solar energy. Can you help me check it?Solar energy : A challenge for Engineers
The energy of the future is solar power. Airplanes powered by solar energy, cars equipped with rechargeable solar batteries and solar cells that supply homes of electricity are just some technological advances that engineers have been working on in recent years. Engineers that are driven by the need to reduce the effects of global warming caused by the burning of fossil fuels have discovered in solar energy an alternative solution to this problem. The use of renewable energy sources is a trend that is gaining ground, but there is still a lot of work to be done. Therefore, the biggest challenge that a solar energy engineer faces today is to consolidate this energy as to be the energy of the future.
My alternative version. I hope I helped :)
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