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A business report: A promotional video (244 words) I'm going to plan to make a promotional short movie which will be shown to potential clients. I need to write the report, describing what the movie should include, and explaining why I have to choose these aspects of my company. First of all, I need to decide who potential clients are. Prospective clients for us have got to be high school students because our company is a university. Therefore, the movie should be made as easy and simple as possible teenager feel attraction. We need to include necessary information about university in the movie at first as an introduction to it — for example, departments and the number of students we have. Many students would want to know about what and how they learn at the university, so we need to include detail educational/curriculum system in it. Showing our particular professional course might be helpful for students because some students would be interested in getting a professional qualification after they graduate. It would be more attractive for students if we would show our several educational events during the academic year. This information could encourage their motivation for learning. The other students may want to know about the information other than academic things, for example, sports and artistic activity at the university. Our university students have many sports and artistic activity groups. This information would be informative for students who want to enjoy not only learning but for the life of the university.​

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I'm going to planning to make a short, promotional short movie which will be shown to potential clients. I need to write the report, describing what the movie should include, and explaining why I have to choose to highlight these aspects of my company.


First of all, I need to decide who the potential clients are. Prospective clients for us have got to be high school students because our company is a university. Therefore, the movie should be made as easy and simple as possible to attract teenagers feel attraction.

We need to include necessary information about the university in the movie at first as an introduction to it — for example, the departments and the number of students we have. Many students would want to know about what and how they learn at the university, so we need to include details regarding our educational approach and curriculum system in it. Showing our particular the professional courses on offer might be helpful for students because some students would be interested in getting a professional qualification after they graduate.

It would be more attractive for students if we would show several of our several educational events during the academic year. This information could encourage improve their motivation for learning.

The Other students may want to know more about the information other than academic things our extracurricular activities, for example such as, sports and artsistic activity at the university. Our university students have many sports and artistic activities available. This information would be informative beneficial for students who want to enjoy not only learning but for the social life of the at our university.​


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