just practice for daily English so it might be informal
Would you help me modify my passage?thanks~
I promise I will write at least one piece of the diary per day. so here's the first day. Hope I can persist on it.
I got a haircut two days ago. It's not bad but it also not good, I guess. I am not satisfied with it completely. But whatever, it's not a big deal. My hair will also grow again. Just be myself. Besides, I am not gonna meet people these days.
Actually, I have been upset these several days. I don't know if it matters my unsatisfied haircut. But I guess the reason is more than about it.
My lifestyle is unhealthy. I stayed up late last night. Actually, I often stay up late at night. But I have enough sleep cause I would wake up at noon. I know even though I sleep well but it is still not good for my health. My biology clock is broken. I got black circles around my eyes. I figure I'd better change these sleep-style things and have some work-out.
OK. That's it for today. See me next time~Cheer myself up~
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just practice for daily English so it might be informal
Would you help me modify my passage?thanks~
I promise I will write at least once a day in my diary,so here's the first entry. Hopefully I can keep it going!
I got a haircut two days ago. It's not bad but it also not good, I guess. I am not satisfied with it completely. But whatever, it's not a big deal. My hair will grow back again. Besides, I am not planning on meeting anyone in the next few days anyway.
Actually, I have been upset these past few days. I don't know if it's my poor haircut, ut I guess the reason is more than just that.
My lifestyle is unhealthy. I stayed up late last night. Actually, I often stay up late at night. But I have enough sleep cause I would wake up at noon. I know even though I sleep well it is still not good for my health. My biological clock is broken and I've got black circles around my eyes. I figure I'd better change these sleeping patterns and maybe get some exercise.
OK. That's it for today. Till next time - hopefully I'll be in a better mood!
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