Creating your own reality

(this is an incomplete sentence) that prevent you from reaching the highest levels of spiritual, emotional, or mental evolution. However, boundaries exist only in your mind.
Don’t let your dream surrender to the so called reality.
When I was in high school，one day during the 1) periods intervals between classes，a friend of mine encouraged me to reach the hoop .At first I stepped backward and responded with 2) a dozens of “no”s But 3) because of under his 4) continuous urging continually instigation，I determined to 5) give it a shot have a try. After a deep breath, I dashed and jumped, sparing no effort.  I 6) and made it unexpectedly. I had never imagined I could make it .None has 7) Nothing has ever brought me the excitement and joy 8) that is brought brings by the touch of the hoop. Sometimes even we ourselves don’t truly know about the potential 9) that lurks ed inside.
So live your life to 10） your the fullest potential，be responsible for yourself and fight for your dream.You are bound to create your own reality.

1) 通常，intervals有距離或空間性的意思。 論學校，用periods比較適當。

2) a + dozens 不對。 a是單數的，dozens是複數的。

4) continually是副詞，你應該用的是形容詞的continuous. Instigating是挑撥、煽動的意思，通常帶有負面的意思。 Urging（鼓勵，勉勵）比較好。

6) 開始新的句子或許比較好。

7) None = no one.

9) 因為這是潛在的能力，所以用現在時態的動詞lurks比較好。

寫的很好！  敬佩敬佩。  ^__^.