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Submitted my final paper I have submitted one of my final papers which is due before today's midnight. After a great number of hours, I completed it, but I still feel not very satisfied with it. One of the biggest reason is that writing in a second language can be tough for me. I am not sure whether what I wrote sound natural or not. What's more, I used some phrases and words repeatedly, such as for example, for instance, show, reveal, etc. I am worried about that using those words constantly will make my paper look more boring. I do hope I can receive a genuine compliment from the particularly demanding professor, perhaps that's an important reason that I worked so hard that sometimes I even felt a little headache. It's not all about trying to please him, but I have the urge to prove myself. Anyway, I have tried my best. One day I will prove myself!

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Submitted my final paper

I have submitted one of my final papers which is due before today's midnight. After a great number of hours, I completed it, but I still don't feel not very satisfied with it. One of the biggest reasons is that writing in a second language can be tough for me. For instance, here I was not sure whether what I wrote sounded natural or not. What's more, I used some phrases and words repeatedly, such as for example, for instance, show, reveal, etc. I am worried about that using those words constantly will make my paper look more boring.

I do hope I can receive a genuine compliment from this particularly demanding professor. Perhaps that's an important enough reason that I worked so hard that sometimes I even felt a little headache. It's not all about trying to please him, but I always have the urge to prove myself. Anyway, I have tried my best. One day I will prove myself!
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Writing in a second language is HARD! I'd love to work with you as you write your English papers! Check out my tutoring profile!
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I understand the struggle of learning and writing another language. I can see that you want to improve more with what you had learned. I do think i can help you with that. Feel free to have a look at my teaching profile and see which type of lessons you like. I do hope i can motivate and support your genuine love to learn the English language. Do message me if you have any question. :)

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