I love ghost
If i become a ghost, i can fly in the sky.
If i become a ghost, i can through the wall.
If i become a ghost, i can stay in the bakery and smell the aroma.
If i become a ghost, i can find my grandma who died.
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I love ghost
If I become a ghost, I can fly in the sky.
If I become a ghost, I can walk through the wall.
If I become a ghost, I can linger in the smells and aromas of the bakery.
If I become a ghost, I can be reunited in death with my beloved grandma.
Very nice poem.
A simple correction: 'I' is always capitalized when used alone.
My other correction just added some color to your great ideas.
Well done!
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