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best lifelong friends I have a big supportive family, 11 siblings and two parents. To me, growing up in a big family was not just about being surrounded by enormous love and support, but it was also about making my best lifelong friends. The unbelievable amounts of laughs and smiles of whom I love the most are engraved on my memory forever. I let my siblings in on any of my little secrets because I knew they would keep loving me in any circumstances. The day I left my family for university, I found out that my family was an absolute treasure.

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best lifelong friends
I have a big supportive family, 11 siblings and two parents. To me, growing up in a big family was not just about being surrounded by enormous love and support, but it was also about making my best lifelong friends ("best" should be omitted as "lifelong" already implies this). The unbelievable amounts of laughs and smiles of from ("with" is also possible depending on your exact meaning) whom I love the most are engraved on my memory forever. I let my siblings in on any of my little secrets because I knew they would keep loving me in any circumstances circumstance. The day I left my family for university, I found out that my family was an absolute treasure.
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Extremely close, minor changes:

I have a big, supportive family; 11 siblings and two parents. To me, growing up in a big family was not just about being surrounded by enormous love and support, but it was also about making my best lifelong friends. The unbelievable amount of laughter and smiles of those whom I love the most are engraved in my memory forever. I let my siblings in on any of my little secrets because I knew they would keep loving me in any circumstance. The day I left my family for university, I found out that my family was an absolute treasure.

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