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Please correct my diary. Almost one week gone, I went to many places this week, especially today, I went back to my university and visited my friends. He is my younger schoolmate and I told him what happened about me recently and also he shared his intern life to me. I can feel that he is working under the pursuer, and suffering unreasonable treatment. he is one of my volleyball teammates. In fact, we fought each other because of his rude before. but we're getting closer and closer nowadays, he likes to tell me everything he met or made, Just like my younger brother. He also invites me to go to Seoul two weeks from now, I’m seriously thinking about it…haha. I may be able to buy some products from Seoul, but sell in Taiwan. It’s like a magic, I can still remember all of the memorize in NTSU in that moment, when I access the school gate. How I wish I could back to school again and again… I also met my ex-coworkers after had a lunch with my friend. we talked a lot… really a lot…not only my experience in this year but also their stories. They complain their new manager who coming from another department, she doesn’t know how to lead a team and respect subordinate. I was a trash can for them, but I can’t image if I were standing their position. Everyone has their own annoyance, me either.

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Please correct my diary.

I went to many places this week, especially today. I went back to my university and visited some friends.

He (it would be better if you started with the person's name, so that the reader would know who you are talking about) is my younger (irrelevant) schoolmate and we talked about our lives. He also shared his experience as an intern with me.
I could feel that he was working under pressure, and was being treated unfairly.
He is also one of my volleyball teammates. Some time ago, we had an argument over his rudeness before but we've been pretty close nowadays. He likes to tell me everything and is like a younger brother to me.

He also invited me to go to Seoul in two weeks with him. I’m seriously thinking about it. I may be able to buy some products from Seoul and resell them in Taiwan.

It’s like a magic. I can still remember the time when I first arrived to NTSU.
How I wish I could go back to school.

I also met my ex co-workers after having lunch with my friend. We talked a lot. Not only about my experiences in this year but about theirs as well.
They complained about their new manager who came from another department. They told me she didn't know how to lead a team and respect subordinate. I cannot imagine what I would do if I were in their position.
Everyone has their own annoyance, even I do.

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