An excellent horse-riding instructor
A young girl named Marta coming from Poland is a very excellent horse-riding instructor. Her family moved to the Leeds in the north of England when she was ten. After getting a horse-riding certificate, she moved to a lovely small village, not far from lake, where perfect for riding.
She has enough patience and good skills for the horse-riding. When some children doesn’t take to it straightway, she often encourages them to talk to the animal in a soft, calm voice.
When she saw children on horseback for the first time, she thought it’s a rewarding work and felt that she wanted to pass on to kids that passion that she has for it .
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An excellent horse-riding instructor
A young girl named Marta coming from Poland is an very 1 excellent horse-riding instructor. Her family moved to the Leeds in the north of England when she was ten. After getting a horse-riding certificate, she moved to a lovely small village, not far from lake, where it was perfect for riding.She has enough patience and good excellent skills for the horse-riding. When some children doesn’t don't take to it straightway, she often encourages them to talk to the animal in a soft, calm voice.
Whenever she saw sees children on horseback for the first time, she thought thinks to herself that it’s a 2 very rewarding work that she does and felt that she wanted to pass on her skills and knowledge to kids that also share the same passion that she has for it horse-riding .
1. When you already have "excellent," no need to insert "very" again.
2. Not right to say "a rewarding work", just say "rewarding work". But you can say "a rewarding career"
Nicely written Tony. Hope this is helpful.
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An Excellent Horse Riding Instructor
A young girl named Marta is coming from Poland and is a very an excellent horse-riding horse riding instructor. Her family moved to the Leeds in the north part of England when she was ten. After getting a horse-riding horse riding certificate, she moved to a lovely small village, not far from lake, where which was perfect for riding.
She has enough patience and good skills is patient and skilled for the horse-riding in horse riding. When some children doesn’t don't take to it straightway, she often encourages them to talk to the animal in a soft, calm voice.
When she saw children on horseback for the first time, she thought it’s it was a rewarding work and felt that she wanted to pass on to kids that the passion that she has for it .
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