An article: My favourite season of the year (162 words)
My favorite season of the year is autumn. I don't like summer because it's a really hot season and we need to use an air-conditioning. I don't like winter as well. The reason is similar to summer. Winter is freezing in Japan, and we need to use a heating machine. I don’t want to go out when it's too hot or cold. I must sweat when it's too hot, and also I need to wear many clothes to go out when it's too cold. If I use a heating machine and an air-conditioning, electric expenditure costs expensive more than spring and autumn.
So, I like spring and autumn because these seasons are comfortable, but I prefer autumn more than spring. The reason why I prefer autumn is, daytime is still longer than spring, and the temperature is comfortable. Moreover, we can enjoy autumn leaves, so-called Momiji-Gari in Japanese. It's wonderful.
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An article: My favourite season of the year (162 words)
My favorite season of the year is autumn. I don't like summer because it's a really hot season so we need to use an air-conditioning. I don't like winter as well either. The reason is similar to summer. Winter is freezing in Japan, so we need to use a heating machine. I don’t want/like to go out when it's too hot or cold. because I must will sweat when it's too hot, and also I will need to wear many clothes* to go out when it's too cold. If I use a When I use the heater in summer machine and/or an the air-conditioning in winter, electricity expenditure bills costs are more expensive more than that of spring and/or autumn**. So, I like spring and autumn because those seasons are comfortable, but I prefer autumn more than spring. The reason why I prefer autumn is, because the daytime in autumn is still longer than that of spring, and the temperature is more comfortable. Moreover, we can enjoy autumn leaves, so-called Momiji-Gari in Japanese. It's/They're wonderful.-
* To avoid repetition, it can be rephrased as: I don't like to go out when it's too hot because I will sweat, or when it's too cold since I will need to wear many layers of clothing.
** Use 'and' if you want to say that the costs in summer and winter are higher than that of winter and spring combined. Use 'or' if you are just referring to cost of the electricity bills of each season.
Great work! Be mindful of too much repetition. I hope this help =)
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