New Shooting and the Tradition of Westerns
Somehow I became a big buff of Netflix. I mostly watch westerns, although I completely understand the limit of this genre. It's just my desire to learn something about the American past and history, and, as a man of art, I prefer to choose a sensual way for it. I'm bored reading historical books or documents, I prefer to see images.
It's really horrifying how often shooting arises on the screen in these American movies. With regard to the last incident in the University of North Carolina - the place I taught in half a year ago - it looks quite cynical, especially when it's done with irony and sarcasm. Nevertheless, the tradition to defend yourself with a weapon is typical for the American society. At first I was shocked when seeing the sign with a crossed (out) gun on every entrances of stores, post offices or pharmacies. It simply reminded me that people around me can carry guns in their pockets or under their coats.Then I just got used to it. However, every time we hear that a certain number of people were killed somewhere in the U.S., the question of prohibition of weapons starts to be discussed again.
I personally don't think that it's possible for this society to make weapons illegal, but I do think that its purchase and the medical examination for this should rely on strictest rules. I also think that the special tax regulation would help to at least reduce the number of killings and victims of shooting.
It's terrible to hear that a couple of young lives were took without any reason, just because someone had the access to firearms.
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New Shooting and the Tradition of Westerns
Somehow I became a big buff of Netflix. I mostly watch westerns, although I completely understand the limit limitations of this genre. It's just my desire to learn something about the American past and history, and, as a man of art, I prefer to choose a sensual visual way for it. I'm bored reading historical books or documents, I prefer to see images.It's really horrifying how often a shooting arises on the screen in these American movies. With regard to the last incident in at the University of North Carolina - the place I taught in at half a year ago - it looks quite cynical, especially when it's done with irony and sarcasm. Nevertheless, the tradition to defend yourself with a weapon is typical for the American society. At first I was shocked when seeing the sign with a crossed (out) gun on every entrances entrance of stores, post offices or pharmacies. It simply reminded me that people around me can carry guns in their pockets or under their coats.Then I just got used to it. However, every time we hear that a certain number of people were killed somewhere in the U.S., the question of prohibition of weapons starts to be discussed again.
I personally don't think that it's possible for this society to make weapons illegal, but I do think that its purchase and the medical examination for this should rely on the strictest rules. I also think that the special tax regulation would help to at least reduce the number of killings and victims of shooting shootings.
It's terrible to hear that when a couple of young lives were took are taken without any reason, just because someone had the access to firearms.
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New Shooting and the Tradition of Westerns
Somehow, I became a big buff of Netflix buff. I mostly watch westerns, although I completely understand the limits of this genre. It's just fulfills my desire to learn something about the American past and history, and, as a man of art, I prefer to choose a sensual sensory way for of doing so it. I'm I get bored reading historical books or documents, so I prefer to see images.It's really horrifying how often shooting arises on the screen in these American movies. With regard to the last incident in the University of North Carolina - the place I taught in half a year ago - it looks quite cynical, especially when it's done with irony and sarcasm. Nevertheless, the tradition to defend yourself with a weapon is typical for the of American society. At first, I was shocked when seeing the sign with a crossed (out) guns on every the entrances of every stores, post offices or, and pharmaciesy. It simply reminded me that people around me can could carry guns in their pockets or under their coats.Then, I just got used to it. However, every time we hear that a certain number of people were killed somewhere in the U.S., the question of prohibition of weapons starts to be discussed again.
I personally don't think that it's possible for this society to make weapons illegal, but I do think that its purchase and the medical examination for this should rely on the strictest rules. I also think that the special tax regulation would help to at least reduce the number of killings and shooting victims of shooting.
It's terrible to hear that a couple of young lives were took taken without any reason, just because someone had the access to firearms.
Good essay!
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Hi Andrei,
This is a very well-written piece. My corrections are in bold. I've also highlighted "sensual" since, although not incorrect, it has erotic connotations and you might want to find a synonym. "Crossed-out gun sign" might be written more naturally as "no-gun sign"; "prohibition of weapons" is often referred to as "gun control" in the media.
I hope this helps!
Best wishes,
Matt
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New Shooting and the Tradition of Westerns
Somehow I became a big Netflix buff. I mostly watch westerns, although I completely understand the limit of this genre. It's just my desire to learn something about the American past and history, and, as a man of art, I prefer to choose a sensual way for it. I'm bored reading historical books or documents, I prefer to see images.It's really horrifying how often shooting arises on the screen in these American movies. With regard to the last incident in the University of North Carolina - where I taught half a year ago - it looks quite cynical, especially when it's done with irony and sarcasm. Nevertheless, America has a long tradition of self-defence with firearms. At first I was shocked when seeing the sign with a crossed-out gun at the entrance of every store, post office or pharmacy. It simply reminded me that people around me can carry guns in their pockets or under their coats.Then I just got used to it. However, every time we hear that a certain number of people were killed somewhere in the U.S., the question of prohibition of weapons starts to be discussed again.
I personally don't think that it's possible for this society to make weapons illegal, but I do think that the purchase of firearms should be much more strictly regulated, including a thorough medical examination. I also think that the special tax regulation would help to at least reduce the number of killings and victims of shooting.
It's terrible to hear that a couple of young lives were took without any reason, just because someone had the access to firearms.
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